Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-03-19 21:18:47
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This is a thread for everyone on here with something to express either in writings poetry dreams or wishes. It doesnt matter what its about , hopefully no one will give anything but constructive critisism....All it has to do is come from the soul....And dont worry.
This is a poem I wrote when I lived with my ex husband in a stately home in Norfolk ...and he lived with his mistress way way up on the top floor..while I roamed alone through the rest of the house miserably unhappy but expected to always be reasonable. because that is the way of the aristocracy and had been for centuries But this was a life for someone without a heart a soul and a spirit........There you are that wasnt too bad.!
The Iron Gates.
Come with me behind the gates
Those gates of iron grand
Into the lives of those inside
With minds of shifting sand.
I bet you wish this was your lot
So priviledged with plenty
To dine insplendour every night
With hearts so cold and empty.
To roam like spectres round the halls
To gaze on paintings fine
to drape yorself in precious jewels
Passed to you down the line.
Barons won and Earls took back
And feuds were fought over land
The Armour they wore
That kept thier hearts cold
The Knights of the Shifting Sand.
And so it comes down to us wretched few
To carry the Ancestral Curses
In hearts that are cold
Bought for pieces of gold
From coffers and soft velvet purses.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 18:06:15
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Fairwell
i sit here now
with head in hand
thinking about leaving
this green and pleasent land.
i sit at the computer
hoping and waiting
i am sad and empty
is what im stateing
i'm loney and sad also.
scared right now.
i want to live.
but dont know how.
i've lost my wife.
my house my car.
but ever seems.
to be so far.
left in dept.
she blead me dry.
that's why i'm leaving.
coz my life's been a lie.
i'm leaving now.
heading for the hills.
with my bottle.
of red little pills.
i leave you now.
and give you love.
maybe i'll come back.
as a white little dove
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 18:41:01
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What does this mean....now I m worried.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 19:06:28
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are you ok 750?
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 19:54:23
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has anyone heard from him..hope he s ok.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 20:01:57
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Dunno ? just have to wait and see ...
Not sure if that was an old poem or made up there and then?
???
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:02:29
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ffs...ninja...dont man...been in your position....let someone know u ok.....it is only fair...every one now worried about u...pleasssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee...THINGS WILL GET BETTER!!!!!!!! i am living proof proof of that....
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:20:09
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Hay im here, whats every one worried about.
Its just a poem i wrote.
750
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:22:47
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Ffs ninj, you shouldn't post things like that
Regardless of how yer feeling, people do care....
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:26:55
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sorry all, i been to pub.
it was just a poem that i wote
i am down but not that bad
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:28:13
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You piggin tosser!
FFS mate i was worrying there. Glad yer ok mate. PM me if you want.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:30:13
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really strange on here, people care about people they dont even know.
Its good that there is good out there.
Im sorry if i fighten any one.
I am wrighting my thoughts in poems but does not mean ill do it .
sorry
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-23 23:32:48
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Thats ok mate but you did have us worried.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-24 10:06:42
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morning ninja...hope today is better for yer xxxx
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-24 14:47:39
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When you're feeling sad or blue
theres only one thing you have to do
turn on you computer and you will find
lots of people on here that can be so kind
dont let life get you down
walk with a smile and not a frown
share how you feel with us if you dare
we will try to help and we do all care
keep ya chin up
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-24 14:52:26
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