Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-03-19 21:18:47
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This is a thread for everyone on here with something to express either in writings poetry dreams or wishes. It doesnt matter what its about , hopefully no one will give anything but constructive critisism....All it has to do is come from the soul....And dont worry.
This is a poem I wrote when I lived with my ex husband in a stately home in Norfolk ...and he lived with his mistress way way up on the top floor..while I roamed alone through the rest of the house miserably unhappy but expected to always be reasonable. because that is the way of the aristocracy and had been for centuries But this was a life for someone without a heart a soul and a spirit........There you are that wasnt too bad.!
The Iron Gates.
Come with me behind the gates
Those gates of iron grand
Into the lives of those inside
With minds of shifting sand.
I bet you wish this was your lot
So priviledged with plenty
To dine insplendour every night
With hearts so cold and empty.
To roam like spectres round the halls
To gaze on paintings fine
to drape yorself in precious jewels
Passed to you down the line.
Barons won and Earls took back
And feuds were fought over land
The Armour they wore
That kept thier hearts cold
The Knights of the Shifting Sand.
And so it comes down to us wretched few
To carry the Ancestral Curses
In hearts that are cold
Bought for pieces of gold
From coffers and soft velvet purses.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:33:00
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We are not heathens, if thats what you mean.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:35:26
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I never even thought for a minute that u were Ox
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:35:57
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there are 20 angels in the world.
10 are sleeping on clouds.
9 are playing.
and 1 in reading this post.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:44:17
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Awwwwwwwwww I'm an angel
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:47:59
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You an angel, i think im a fallen angel.lol
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:49:48
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Nah ur wings will dry out n you'll get back up
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:50:58
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We are all poets, we just dont know it.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:51:27
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need to find my halo as well.lol
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:52:21
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Its not that rusty ring lyin over there is it ??
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:53:32
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o is that were it is, ill have to get polishing lol.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 22:55:15
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get sum wire wool on it LOL
That aside - back to the thread - music is food for the soul
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 23:02:57
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I knew all along
That I was right at the start
bout the seeds of the weeds
That grew in your heart
Self satisfaction for the factions
Who formed to tear us apart
Well I gave you the Midas touch
Oh you turned round and scratched out my heart
Oh what did you expect?
Oh tell me what did you expect?
To lay it on my head
So is it all upon my head?
Bang bang you're dead
Oh Im so easily lead
Bang bang you're dead
Put all the rumours to bed
Bang bang you're dead
I knew all along
But I was loathe to believe
There was nothing but spite
Fury and lies
Of the words that you weave
An illusion to a conclusion
And oh its oh so tawdry
When you put it to bed
Kick it in the head
Oh wont they just let it be
Bang bang you're dead
Always so easily lead
Bang bang you're dead
Put all the rumours to bed
Bang bang you're dead
I heared this song and thought it was made for me lol
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 23:43:34
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I hear quite a few songs like that
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-21 23:12:12
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Millions died to save this land
to have the country in our hands
But who remembers the dead and gone
the ones who faced the dreaded bomb
sons and dads husbands and brothers
were draged to war along with others
they never came back or said goodbye
did they even know they were going to die
They were the heros the ones with the balls
sitting in darkness inside the trench walls
waiting for something or someone to give
wondering if they were going to live
To the ones who are gone
and those that live on
this country you did save
you were courageous and brave
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 01:01:27
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Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-03-19 21:18:47
