Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-03-19 21:18:47
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This is a thread for everyone on here with something to express either in writings poetry dreams or wishes. It doesnt matter what its about , hopefully no one will give anything but constructive critisism....All it has to do is come from the soul....And dont worry.
This is a poem I wrote when I lived with my ex husband in a stately home in Norfolk ...and he lived with his mistress way way up on the top floor..while I roamed alone through the rest of the house miserably unhappy but expected to always be reasonable. because that is the way of the aristocracy and had been for centuries But this was a life for someone without a heart a soul and a spirit........There you are that wasnt too bad.!
The Iron Gates.
Come with me behind the gates
Those gates of iron grand
Into the lives of those inside
With minds of shifting sand.
I bet you wish this was your lot
So priviledged with plenty
To dine insplendour every night
With hearts so cold and empty.
To roam like spectres round the halls
To gaze on paintings fine
to drape yorself in precious jewels
Passed to you down the line.
Barons won and Earls took back
And feuds were fought over land
The Armour they wore
That kept thier hearts cold
The Knights of the Shifting Sand.
And so it comes down to us wretched few
To carry the Ancestral Curses
In hearts that are cold
Bought for pieces of gold
From coffers and soft velvet purses.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 01:28:38
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Whos eyes, mine?
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 01:34:26
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Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 01:39:39
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Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 01:51:41
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Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 03:20:12
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I, aint poetic at all, but these r some.. lyrics to a great choon... ' hooberstank' The Reason.....
I'm not a perfect person
As many things I wish I didn't do
But I continue learning
I never meant to do those things to you
And so I have to say before I go
That I just want you to know
I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
And the reason is you
I'm sorry that I hurt you
it's something I must live with everyday
And all the pain I put you through
I wish that I could take it all away
And be the one who catches all your tears
that's why I need you to hear
I've found a resaon for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
And the reason is you
well done rest of ya, some good poems there.. will have to work on 1 myself
xx
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 06:29:11
"A doubtful love is like ice on the summers seas!"
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 19:41:28
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This one i.ve called the children
I need to tell you.
i love you all.
but it was not me.
that made it fall.
i hope you are all.
are good and fine.
at this here.
very sad time.
i know its your mum.
but she hurt me so.
i had no option.
but i had to go.
i could not stay.
and live the lie.
it would have hurt me.
and made me cry.
i hopr you know.
i love you all.
and all you have to.
do is make the call.
she was the one.
that had an affair.
thats why i'm gone.
but i do care.
i,m on my bike.
and ride the street.
waiting and hoping.
that we will meet.
it hurts me so.
not to see you all.
i really need you.
all to call.
i was your dad.
for 10 years of life.
and thats why.
i cry at night.
im not good at poems but i just have to right this.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 19:53:48
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Awwwwwwwwww ninj - that was beautiful !!!!
N it will get better !!!
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 19:58:49
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A great verse mate but please can i just advise one thing?
Don't call there mother. Wharever happened between you they WILL always stand by her as she is their mum.
As i have already told you in conversation my circumstances are very similar to yours and from experience i can tell you i won more respect by not slaging her off than if i had done. She is flesh and blood.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 20:02:54
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Well said KK
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 20:06:24
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And for what its worth mate i have a tear for you. That was straight from your heart.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 20:17:35
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Me too n I dont do tears !!!
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 20:19:35
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thank you all, i miss the kids and all there trouble.
i do talk to the daughter on msn but her mum is always in the back ground.
so can not be to open.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 20:23:00
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Just give it time mate.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-05-22 20:23:00
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