Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-03-19 21:18:47
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This is a thread for everyone on here with something to express either in writings poetry dreams or wishes. It doesnt matter what its about , hopefully no one will give anything but constructive critisism....All it has to do is come from the soul....And dont worry.
This is a poem I wrote when I lived with my ex husband in a stately home in Norfolk ...and he lived with his mistress way way up on the top floor..while I roamed alone through the rest of the house miserably unhappy but expected to always be reasonable. because that is the way of the aristocracy and had been for centuries But this was a life for someone without a heart a soul and a spirit........There you are that wasnt too bad.!
The Iron Gates.
Come with me behind the gates
Those gates of iron grand
Into the lives of those inside
With minds of shifting sand.
I bet you wish this was your lot
So priviledged with plenty
To dine insplendour every night
With hearts so cold and empty.
To roam like spectres round the halls
To gaze on paintings fine
to drape yorself in precious jewels
Passed to you down the line.
Barons won and Earls took back
And feuds were fought over land
The Armour they wore
That kept thier hearts cold
The Knights of the Shifting Sand.
And so it comes down to us wretched few
To carry the Ancestral Curses
In hearts that are cold
Bought for pieces of gold
From coffers and soft velvet purses.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-01 00:47:08
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Your loving smile, your skin so fair,
The sunlight flickers through your hair.
beauty shines within your face,
I can't give up my life long chase.
I see you almost every day,
As I walk along my lovetorn way.
A smile you give , a passing glance,
You leave me in a pensive trance.
I'd love to ask you out on a date,
I'd dress up smart and not be late,
My love for you I'll never show,
And I guess you'll never ever know.
You belong to someone else you see,
He's strong and handsome not like me,
In fact he is like no other,
I know this for he is my brother................
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-01 03:58:32
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this is not a poem
this a thank u to rhona
thanks for ure time 2nte
thanks for listening
ure heart frozen
not anymore
neithers mine
one day
remember....that bit was left un said...but u no
c u at next game.....ure an angel without wings
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-01 05:54:59
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why is ther so much hate in the world when there is so much love ?
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-01 06:38:34
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That is a very good question Tosh. I suppose it comes from bitterness and anger.This is stirring stuff.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-01 22:45:38
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IT KILLS
Wanting something you cannot have,
Brings you nothing but trouble.
You know its wrong, you know damn well,
But you carry on till it grabs you.
Your losing sleep, your growing tired,
Your slipping away its killing you !
You want it , you can't get it,
You want it ,You'll kill to get it.
No money, no score, no score , no sweet dreams,
You know its wrong you know damn well.
Your slipping away its killing you.
Your getting low near rock bottom now,
Will no-one help are you going to die,
You've got the shakes and your turning blue,
Your an addict now and your paying the price,
the price is high , its the only one you can pay,
And the price is death..................................
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-02 00:27:19
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after all it is my game..do what i want or i will leave-dont complain-dont cry-dont shout-dont talk- dont withold sex-be nice to me-treat me good do as i say or else. control is mine-still not happy- gotta be so important-dont forget-dont be sad-dont be quiet-dont b glum-be happy-all the time-flirt with me-have sex with me-be a slut with me-but ill leave you tonight or tomorrow or when you annoy me or dont play my game for me,or see it my way-what ever you do do not complain. your eggshells hurt my feet-they hurt my soul-they make me shake-they make me anxious-they make me sick inside-but do not upset me- flatter me-your eggshells make me talk-make me nice too you-make me want to hurt you-give you pain- but do not complain- after all it is my game..
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-04 01:00:59
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who dared 2 let this thread die.....not me thats for sure
soon ill be movin on
my year almost up
those who no know
on and on its been a rocky road
twists and turns along the waybut i still pray for tomorrow
all my hopes..my dreams dont fade away
dont let my dreams fade away
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 00:05:54
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whassup froog?
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 08:40:27
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are you ok froogie?
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 08:52:52
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froog don't worry me pls ........... explain that
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 09:03:22
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Mysteries are as treasures,
Once unraveled-
Never more to be spent again.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 09:23:50
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An empty room, a vacant chair
somethings missing everywhere,
you left a space no-one can fill
i miss you now and always will.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 09:41:33
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Its here that tme stands still
Waiting for the breath of the morning sun
Glinting over the 'Dreaming Spires'.
The first bicycle rides over the pebbles
And dissapeares into a' Venetian' labyrinth
Who knows where he is going
Maybe to finish his paper
Maybe to breakfast with his girlfriend
Or maybe with a Don..
Its here that you can accept yourself
And allow yourself to be.
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 19:15:09
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Well.......... is a deep subject
Thread For Creativity, Writing and Poetry For All - Posted on 2006-04-05 20:56:02
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thanks for caring peeps...but u mis understood me...i go deep sumtimes...and not a lot can understand........im cool........well i am now..cuz i no theirspeople like me out there.
and that people is u.............xxx
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