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    the blood letting - Posted on 2004-11-29 18:58:17

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The Blood Letting The lady moves through the crowded night Long blonde hair and black leather tight Past dancing people she makes her way In her search of this nights prey A handsome man amongst the crowd stands out His darkened eyes make her heart shout With poise and grace she passes close by A sexual taunt to catch his eye A smile and glance reels him in And with a promise of a night full of sin She leads him out and takes him away Through darken alleys where shadows come to play Inside the house she beckons to enter Like a lamb to market he goes to slaughter Once locked inside she bids him undress An offer of fantasy to him she does stress Across her bed she shackles him tight With chains of steel that resist all his might Upon his chest she sits astride Her hair covers all that she would hide Slowly her movements on him excites As she lowers her head and flesh she bites Through torn skin his blood does swell This the taste she knows so well Through pain and pleasure the man gasps Against the bonds he strains and clasps Her razor fangs she bares As into his dark eyes she stares With rhythmic ride she takes his soul His body to her is just a bowl A container of life for her to drain Flavoured by anguish despair and pain His muscles flex and pulse beat throbs As the lady drains his final sobs From many cuts his life does bleed From these wounds she does feed But before his life passes away The lady’s mind does seem to sway Instead of bleeding him dry Her art on him she does ply A cut upon her breast she makes And with her blood the man awakes For into undeath he has crossed Her way of life on him embossed The price of her love in all reality Is to stay and hunt for all eternity

 

 

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   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-01 13:20:06

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mmm no replies to this one i wonder if it was a bit too deep for some or maybe not deep enough

 

   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-02 10:12:14

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That is FANTASTIC pale hun...............vampires hay ?? so many storys can be made out of that poem......a very deep but wondiful one plae well done m8

 

   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 13:57:07

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not a big fan of poems but this one is cool as are the rest of your ramblings.

 

   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 15:53:46

Pale_Rider
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cheers dude (and horney) its is good to know that fine art is still appreciated (pmsl) i will still talk to you all when im a rich and famous author

 

   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 17:04:22

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Actually got really horny reading that one pale!!! ;o) Might have to take it to bed tonight as Rob's not home :o(

 

   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 22:38:37

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thanks bubbles i hope you enjoy the other one as much ;-)

 

   the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-04 00:30:55

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yeah can we have more sex in em pls i might take em to bed too then lol

 

 



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