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The Blood Letting
The lady moves through the crowded night
Long blonde hair and black leather tight
Past dancing people she makes her way
In her search of this nights prey
A handsome man amongst the crowd stands out
His darkened eyes make her heart shout
With poise and grace she passes close by
A sexual taunt to catch his eye
A smile and glance reels him in
And with a promise of a night full of sin
She leads him out and takes him away
Through darken alleys where shadows come to play
Inside the house she beckons to enter
Like a lamb to market he goes to slaughter
Once locked inside she bids him undress
An offer of fantasy to him she does stress
Across her bed she shackles him tight
With chains of steel that resist all his might
Upon his chest she sits astride
Her hair covers all that she would hide
Slowly her movements on him excites
As she lowers her head and flesh she bites
Through torn skin his blood does swell
This the taste she knows so well
Through pain and pleasure the man gasps
Against the bonds he strains and clasps
Her razor fangs she bares
As into his dark eyes she stares
With rhythmic ride she takes his soul
His body to her is just a bowl
A container of life for her to drain
Flavoured by anguish despair and pain
His muscles flex and pulse beat throbs
As the lady drains his final sobs
From many cuts his life does bleed
From these wounds she does feed
But before his life passes away
The lady’s mind does seem to sway
Instead of bleeding him dry
Her art on him she does ply
A cut upon her breast she makes
And with her blood the man awakes
For into undeath he has crossed
Her way of life on him embossed
The price of her love in all reality
Is to stay and hunt for all eternity
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the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-01 13:20:06
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mmm no replies to this one i wonder if it was a bit too deep for some or maybe not deep enough
the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-02 10:12:14
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That is FANTASTIC pale hun...............vampires hay ??
so many storys can be made out of that poem......a very deep but wondiful one plae well done m8
the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 13:57:07
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not a big fan of poems but this one is cool as are the rest of your ramblings.
the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 15:53:46
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cheers dude (and horney) its is good to know that fine art is still appreciated (pmsl) i will still talk to you all when im a rich and famous author
the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 17:04:22
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Actually got really horny reading that one pale!!! ;o)
Might have to take it to bed tonight as Rob's not home :o(
the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-03 22:38:37
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thanks bubbles i hope you enjoy the other one as much ;-)
the blood letting - Posted on 2004-12-04 00:30:55
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yeah can we have more sex in em pls i might take em to bed too then lol